All Comments on 'Handle Pressure'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Motivation?

Why? What brought your character here? She's a cardboard cliche. Read dweaver999's Valerie series and see how a character can become believable.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

This seems like a fun idea i would love to try

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