All Comments on 'Heart of the Wolf Ch. 10'

A very nice ending, I quest you are going to do Sage's story next.

Loved this story and can't wait to read more on Kaine and Catie. But Sage seems a very interesting character and I can't wait to learn more about her x

*smiles*

Very lovely ending to this portion of their story. Keep up the wonderful writing and i look forward to reading the next series in Kaine and Catie's story.

This has been a great story from beginning to end. Cannot wait for the next saga, so please don't stay away too long. :)

This cannot be over. I loved this story. Thank you for writing such a captivating tale. I anxiously await more from you.

We NEED babies!!!!!! Pups to be exact! I could only imagine what their pups would look like.

What if they had a daughter and she was like snow white and the girl from "brave"?

good read /

-by Rob LE

Kept me interested from beginning to end. Great read. Give us puppies.

I would love to read Caties new beta finds her mate in her new pack, maybe the computer geek, that would be fun ;)

More, please? I see 3 possible sequels (2 already noted above: Sage, puppies), but also a 3rd: Catie learning how to fight and be the Madam Alpha, and learning the ins and outs of being Wolf. Also noting is explained about her (and the other 2)'s disappearance from the vet clinic and what happens to it!

This was by far a very interesting and enjoyable read. Kept me wanting more. Love the fact that Cadence was brave enough to handle Logan and Layla.

I enjoyed this. I would loved other stories of this pact and hope you will write them for us. I would love more on Kaine and Cairo and also Sage. Great writing

This was a wonderful story. Thanks so much.

I LOVED THE STORY AND THE CHARACTERS, YOU WRITE VERY WELL AND LEFT ME QUITE HAPPY. I'M OFF TO SEE WHAT ELSE YOU HAVE WRITTEN. THANKS AGAIN. KYM

I am in love with your characters and your writing style. I look forward to more of Kaine and Catie.

I am in love with your characters and with your writing! You are doing an excellent job with your storylines. Makes me want more!

I love your story!!!

I commented on the minor mistakes in grammar, spelling and word choice at the end of the previous chapter, then I saw that while many had agreed with me, none had actually offered to help.

Apparently it's really hard to find a willing editor on here (which I get. We all have hectic lives these days), so I thought I'd volunteer. I love this story and it annoys me that some people couldn't get past the minuscule errors and enjoy it as much as I did.

Please never stop writing!

Absolutely love this story! Please write again soon.

Thank you! Well written :)

That, was a very well written story. Thank you. Keep up the wonderful writing, you have a gift.

Written a while back now and it appears the author no longer checks their profile, but constructive criticism is for future writers who read this. I liked most of the story, there was no need within the plot for the rape, plus anyone that interacts with modern people and attitudes would have had a “reality check” on their attitudes towards women way before the sons sudden and abrupt change, tbh both villain characters were very two dimensional, almost pantomime baddies, neither had any kind of justification or back story as to why they were like they were, a hint at childhood parental abuse etc would have helped enormously there. Also no follow up re the Vets death, no Police search or similar, due to the lack of world building we don’t know if this is a “Wolf tolerant society” or the opposite, either would have helped fill in the blanks. Fingers crossed our Author has kept writing, if not I hope they’re happy and well. Thanks for writing and posting, cheers Ppfzz.