All Comments on 'Heat Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
keep it comming

just as awesome as the first

ChainzzChainzzover 18 years ago
another howwwwwling good time

Ch.2 was fun too , I enjoyed it alot . Didnt know you were so creative .. I'm impressed .

Nice work ea.

Chainz

A25ishaA25ishaover 18 years ago
MORE MORE MORE

Great story, nice use of tension. Please don't leave us hanging, would love to see the next chapter!!

lancewannabelancewannabeover 18 years ago
Continued lust!

Extremely HOT. Thanks! Very inspiring to think of taking you in the same manner!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Your work is

fantastic, kinky and erotic, sex with a sensual heat that can take away the breath and make even the coldest pussy purr...but you need to proofread a little. Otherwise, perfection.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Fucking hot!

I'm not a fan of BDSM but this play of "hard to get" is such a turnon!! Wow, keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
It's really hot, but,,,

there are so many grammar/spelling mistakes that at times, i didn't even understand what you were getting at. But for the most part, i loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Very good

Love the stories

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