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Anonymousalmost 16 years agoIt's really hot, but,,,
there are so many grammar/spelling mistakes that at times, i didn't even understand what you were getting at. But for the most part, i loved it.
Anonymousabout 18 years agoFucking hot!
I'm not a fan of BDSM but this play of "hard to get" is such a turnon!! Wow, keep writing!
Anonymousover 18 years agoYour work is
fantastic, kinky and erotic, sex with a sensual heat that can take away the breath and make even the coldest pussy purr...but you need to proofread a little. Otherwise, perfection.
lancewannabeover 18 years agoContinued lust!
Extremely HOT. Thanks! Very inspiring to think of taking you in the same manner!
A25ishaover 18 years agoMORE MORE MORE
Great story, nice use of tension. Please don't leave us hanging, would love to see the next chapter!!
Chainzzover 18 years agoanother howwwwwling good time
Ch.2 was fun too , I enjoyed it alot . Didnt know you were so creative .. I'm impressed .
Nice work ea.
Chainz
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