All Comments on 'Hen Party'

That he would agree to do ANYTHING for $500? Stupidity runs amok. Horrible characters acting without rhyme or reason. Just plain awful story.

...then COULD ANYBODY BE THAT STUPID could have enjoyed the story.

First, $500 was the agreed upon price. Have you ever heard of being TIPPED?

Second, if someone offered a young, horny guy money to do something they'd probably do for free, and they felt they could trust the other person, then Yes, They would probably agree. Be naked in front of a crowd of women? And you like being naked in front of a crowd of women? (Have you bothered to read the other stories the author has written?)

Why is it so hard to believe the guy in question would agree? You're reading FANTASIES, stories that are MADE UP, but you have a problem believing THAT part of the story?

This is plenty close to my ultimate fantasy. To be naked in front of only women, and it be completely ok, and even expected? Allowed and urged to get hard, and then even get to cum for the crowd? Oh hell yes! I've placed Craigslist ads offering such CFNM type services, but sadly, I've never had anyone take me up on it yet.

Very erotic. But I expected him to get spanked. In the next chapter the women should give him a real hard spanking.

I really liked your story. Great fantasy. I would love to have a party with a naked guy entertaining. The only minor critique I have is that I would've liked a little description about the ring toss and game of twister. That would've been fun to read. Great job though and I can't wait for your next story.

very nice story! enjoyed it!

I get so turned on by this. I would love to be a naked servant

The ring toss, although if someone's aim was a little low....

Fun storie

My Thanks

Oh my dayum. ummmmmmm, the bridal showers I get invited to are NEVER this interesting. It's usually a bunch of women dressed up eating finger sandwiches & then the guest of honor opens up a bunch of gifts (none of them remotely sexual) and then we all go home. I think I'd rather go to one of the hen parties you write about.

This feels like it was a testing the waters story. Way too short. Feels like a warm/moist set of full, pouty lips that has just slid from my root to all the way up & off my manhood ... and nothing followed. Kinda hanging there & wanting to get off but the only thing I can do it take the matter into my own hands. The premise, I believe, could have been a real fun read. I would like to see it reworked and expanded as well as continued w more stories. The Twister game itself would have been a great side-story.

Please don't let the adventures of Dan just sit and dangle.

I really enjoyed what there was.

Could we continue this with more Hen Party adventures. There's a LOT more they could do with/to him. I'm a male model who models for art classes + his is like my ultimate fantasy. I Would LUV 2 b that guy + be the entertainment/plaything for a group of horny, appreciative women.

5* from me

I can only dream

Entertaining, sadly I expected more so I only have 4* at least I expected him to satisfy Ms Johnson.