All Comments on 'Her New Black Lover'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Wonderful sensual description

The Tittle says it all. I enjoyed the pace of your enjoyment in a slow and sexy feel. P.S. I noticed it’s been years since the majority of your submissions, too bad for me, I really enjoy your mind.

Thanx,

Pirate49@yahoo.com

LoveNSquelchesLoveNSquelchesover 16 years ago
Came To A Stop Sign and Detour In Your Story

I stopped reading and moved on after reading the narrative observation that the black character looked good for a black man.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great!!!

Loved it as i always love any of your stories. Well written. Liked the female character being angry and horny...a fantastic job as always :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Try a reversal

Black lady and white man with twelve inches stuck in elevator. He says what you need is a large white cock. Listen to the lawsuits and discrimination noises that come out of that one. This is pure racial blather.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Very Good

Really enjoyed story. Well written.

BazzzBazzzover 17 years ago
Well done

The seduction was a little abrupt for me but over all this was a nice sexy short story. Nice use of the stalled elevator.

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