All Comments on 'Hot Embers'

Very erotic feminine story. I do like you hot romantic women. Nice change from "find 'em, bang 'em" stories. Sweet. Intelligent writing.

A promising story,but you should have an editor.I hope you develop the ESP side in a future episode,as you left some loose ends.

Keep it up!!

If you ignore the questions of spelling and grammar, this basic story is very nice. It is a good beginning for a series of stories with these two intelligent people and the neat cat.