All Comments on 'Hot Tailed Desires Ch. 02'

Please find yourself an editor to help you tighten the story up .Otherwise it is a good effort but with editing it could be a great one .

I have no complaints about this series, I just hope to see it continue for a long time to come.

It gives me paws

All that talk about fertility--I can't talk about this here.

You can think nobody could possibly notice anything you write here, but somehow they might.

So even if it's good, you can' t talk about it.

But can I say I can't talk about it over and over?

I can't talk about it! I can't talk about it!!!

My daughter just became a ballerina.

I don't have a daughter! That's why it's a metaphor!