All Comments on 'Housewarming Party'

Wow, it took you two paragraphs before the fucking started-no character development, no reluctance, no anticipation. All of the actors are alike. I usually don't comment on bad stories, but you win the prize as the worst on this site. Congrats!

...it is the situation. An author could write the best sex scenes found on Literotica, but if they don't build tension then it's no better than a $9.99 wall-to-wall porn tape, i.e. just a bunch of meat going in and out of holes.

I gave it a two only because you can spell.

all of a sudden someone says "let's strip."

first of all, bullshit.

Second of all, WHY? what brought that on?

No one just blurts out of their mouth "let's strip."

were they talking about sex? flirting?

This was less believable than the wors "plot" line of the worst piece of porn I've enver seen.

Total crap.