All Comments on 'I Love You Ch. 10'

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kymommy30kymommy30over 14 years ago
omg!

This was a great chapter that bitch maid finally got what she desevered! Can't wait till next chapter! You always leave your readers wanting more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
WELCOME BACK!!!!!!!!

i've been checking for an update every week since the last chapter, it was so worth the wait, Jake is hot!! Jez is smokin!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Hell yes!!!

Awesome awesome!!! I was afraid that you where never coming back lol

I have been waiting for this one!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
finally!!!

Finally, finally, finally! Sooooooooooooo very glad that stupid bitch Ludvine got what she deserved. Jez is one crazy female though lol. I hope it doesn't end well with Ludvine and her mind tricks. And Jake ... well ... we'll see next chapter what Jez does to him! lol Please hurry with the next update!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Blown away....

OMG thank you for another chapter wohhoooo

hmmm i woudner wats gna happn 2 jake!

SecretFantasy69SecretFantasy69over 14 years ago
GO Jez!!

Loved it! Loved that she beat that bitch down because Ludvine was really asking for it. Trying to poision ppl, is she crazy? Rhetoric question of course! Ah! next chapter. this is too awesome. i can just imagine that she's about beat jake now. they are both deliciously twisted. thank god though because they are fun.

raunchyrareraunchyrareover 14 years ago
This was great girl!

when can we expect the next chapter ??????

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
checking everyday!

I'm checking everyday, at least twice!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!

LilMami07LilMami07over 14 years ago
Godddd...

GIVE ME MORE!! lol i loved it!! 'Bout time that bitch got what she deserved. Now it Jakey's turn...

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Oh S..t, Yeah

Go Jezebel, beat the hell out of that *B* Ludvine. Oh yeah, this was a great update. I loved it and about damn time she was able to get out and I was so happy to read that she beat the shit out of that heifer...oh yeah...thanks so much for a great read.

AS for Dude, his aunt should have slapped the mess out of him for locking Jezebel up.

His friend should be a shame of himself for not allowing his girlfriend to go to her friends rescue.

Thanks again

fluerfluerover 14 years ago
Great Update

Ludivine got played. This update made my day.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
OMG!!!

i can't wait for more .this was well worth the wait

adrikaadrikaover 14 years ago
Encore!!

She needs to beat the hell outta Ludvine one more time and fuck Jack's ass up!!! UGHH!!!....anyhooo...WONDERFUL CHAPTER!! UPDATE SOON!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
MMMOOOOOOORRRRREEEE

MMOORREE MMOOREEE MMOORREEE I BEG YOU MORE!

airfoce1974airfoce1974over 14 years ago
top

nice presentation

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
i miss this story sooo much

please hurry back 2 us

fluerfluerover 14 years ago
PLEASE UPDATE

You've left us hanging too long. I must admit to taking pride in Ludi's suffering. The hand writting on the forehead was a nice touch. As for Jake, whe he comes to... I'm sure he will be getting a taste of his own medicine. I am enjoying this story.

UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
We need a conclusion this story is hot!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yo it was about time that Lud got her ass served to her. I just loved the beat down Jezi gave her. But please pretty please finish this story. Continue the excellent work.

cocoadivacocoadivaover 14 years ago
Don't leave us hang'in

Oh really! You've got to finish this story, please, please, please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Oh Come On!!! Your killing me here!!!

Please finish this story...I've been waiting for months!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
I hear Buckcherry in my head...

Damn, I'm glad that bitch got what she had coming. Don't know what I'm more upset about, how long it took Ludvine to get paid what she's owed, or this damn cliffhanger! Hope you've got time to get the next chapter up soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
More....pls

I hated that bitch. I'm so happy that she got her ass kicked, also Jack's a little bitch him self, if hes soo worryed about the baby he, him self should be watching her not some maid he doesn't know! the babys most likly died by now...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Please!!!

I have to admit I was kind of falling out of erotic stories, they were always the same plot over and over again, but these series are incredibly fascinating! Its not just about sex, the characters are addictive, which is why I am begging you to please finish this story! Its too good to finish like this!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

-Oh and this is definitely a 10/10!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

Just finish the story annd quit wasting peoples time

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

listen here redwitch your a bitch,if you didnt plan on finishing the story,why did you start it i the first place,smh thats so cruel

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Please Finish!

I would love to know how this ends. I was really getting into the story. Hope you finish it soon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
pretty please????

i LOVE this chapter!!! I've been waitin for karma to whoop Ludvine's ass, lol! Pretty please finish the story....cliffhangers are pure TORTURE!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

please finish the story!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
PLEASE!!

Pleaseee pleaseee update soon!!! I really want to continue reading, I love this story so much. You've done such a great job so far! I really hope to read the ending for this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
OMFG!!!!!!

You are absolutely amazing!!! OMG I'm going to DIE if you don't update soon!! OMG I'm going crazy thinking about this story!!! OMG I love YOU for writing this!!!

OH MY G--!!!!!!!

*Hyperventilates and just goes crazy and starts rolling around on the floor*

-mpb22

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Pleassssseee update soon!

Totally love this series.... read it twice... waiting for a conclusion!!! please update soon.... really would like to what happens....

Jujubee50Jujubee50over 13 years ago

You really need to finiish this story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
You really need to finish asap!

I can't take it anymore...finish pleeeaseeee it's soooooo effing :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
OMG!!

I think I may actually cry if the ending of this story does not come soon...

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Umm...

Could you like,finish this please I'm dieing to know what happens next!!!

Kay thanks :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
WHY.........

Havnt u finished this story?????????????????? i really cant wait for the endin i hope its good please finish the story the anticipation is killin me

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Please Finish!!!!!!!!

Please finish this story!!!! I can't wait to see what happens.......

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOover 12 years ago
SO

hilarious, that Ludvine forgot the Biblical saying,"Do unto others as you would have others to do unto you"

I love Jezebels' desire to plot and think ahead whether on her feet or not.

AzaliaAzaliaalmost 12 years ago
XD

OMG too good *goes to chapter 11*

mssoft2hldmssoft2hldabout 5 years ago

Geoff is full of shit. His anxieties to do the right thing my ass

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