by miserybusiness
From a virgin teenager to LSD induced threesome in one night? From sweet, protective and loving boyfriend to let's split roast my girlfriend? That's quite a leap, and not in a positive way. To me, the story is getting off track. It's no longer my cup of tea. I would suggest a re-write, but do what you feel is best.
Really didn't see that coming hope Ralph doesn't mess up what they have and they never should have taken LSD hope no one gets addicted
Anyways great story