by SelmaSnickerdoodle
if the truth be told, it's not only men who sometimes fantasize about this...
Speaking as a woman who does get turned on by nonconsent stories, I thought this was pretty good. I would have liked the actual sex to either be more detailed or last a little longer; it felt too brief to me.
The storyline was good; however, details need to be added. The ripping of her clothes, the penetration, and the ending all occurred too quickly. Next story, take your time and build on the good storyline.