All Comments on 'Ice Maiden Thawed'

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melsdadmelsdadabout 16 years ago
Realistically written

Every guys fantasy brilliantly described.

Joyce19063Joyce19063about 16 years ago
Actually only a total creep would call this

his fantasy--

jimewestjimewestabout 16 years ago
I guess I'm a creep...

Love it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Loved it

if the truth be told, it's not only men who sometimes fantasize about this...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Fun for all sexes

Speaking as a woman who does get turned on by nonconsent stories, I thought this was pretty good. I would have liked the actual sex to either be more detailed or last a little longer; it felt too brief to me.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
First time, not bad

The storyline was good; however, details need to be added. The ripping of her clothes, the penetration, and the ending all occurred too quickly. Next story, take your time and build on the good storyline.

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