by SelmaSnickerdoodle
The storyline was good; however, details need to be added. The ripping of her clothes, the penetration, and the ending all occurred too quickly. Next story, take your time and build on the good storyline.
Speaking as a woman who does get turned on by nonconsent stories, I thought this was pretty good. I would have liked the actual sex to either be more detailed or last a little longer; it felt too brief to me.
if the truth be told, it's not only men who sometimes fantasize about this...