All Comments on 'In Too Deep Ch. 01'

I love the build up this story has. I'm easily able to picture the setting and flow of the story as I read, which is hard for most authors to create for their readers. There were 2 or 3 grammatical errors but hardly noticeable really. Haha, now I'M the one left wet and panting ....cannot wait for chapter 2. I need to know more about this Adam guy!