All Comments on 'Incarnate'

This was a great story! Hope to read more of it in the future.

Seems like the fanfiction of a goth vampire wannabe, further cemented by the fact that you, as the main character, looked upon the goths affectionately, and even suggested that they were vampires in past lives.

The sex, which was what I bloody came for (pun unintended), left me wanting (not to mention soft) which is definitely not what you should be aiming for.