All Comments on 'It Couldn't Be Helped Ch. 03'

This is a very well written story. So far I love all 3 chapters.

i think i am going to die if they don't hook up soon. I love all three installments so far. this story is really good. I can't wait for you to publish the next chapter. Speaking as a black woman (who dates across the color line) I just loved it - simply orgasmic!!!

I am loving it. It is a sweet reminder of the past for me because I have been in a similar situation and can so relate... I feel like I am reading about my own past. Kudos to you baby..

The problem I have with stories of these types of surreptitious encounters is that the... erm, fragrance of a woman's arousal is ususally quite distinct. That they're not detected, especially in closed vehicles, stretches my crediblility.

Otherwise, a very good story.

Yeah, each pussy has it's own fragrance, but the man is in Colorado...in a vehichle in which the heat doesn't work.

He does play the visual card, however, as the noisy girlfriend in the front clues in with her concern. Or is Laurie jealous? Nonetheless, the Sista's credibility is what carries this load.

HampDawg

. . . some nasty dirty bitches if he thinks Crystal's "arousal" scent would give them all away! hahaha

OT2NO

She played that off lol I would've died laughing if Jenna was actually still awake

I love the vernacular in your stories. I feel as if I am really a part of the story because of the way you write.

so good.