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All Comments on 'It Happened One Summer Ch. 02'

by DragonSlayer_OK

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mekakymekakyalmost 15 years ago
Awesome

Great update, can't wait to read more

bulldogdeebulldogdeealmost 15 years ago
How Long?

How long do we have to wait to see what is going to happen with David and Shauna? This story has raised a lot of questions in my own mine. THANX a million!!!!

UnexpectedVixenUnexpectedVixenalmost 15 years ago
Yet another lucious tale.....

You have outdone yourself, my darling...I anxiously await Chapter 3....

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Write more, Write more, Write more!

DS,

Write more!

DD

willerileywillerileyabout 12 years ago
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Subjectively: This story reminds me of cotton candy. Takes up a lot of space but not a lot there. Ultimately, lack of character dimensions means I won't be back. Sensual portions don't warrant coming back for those alone.

Objectively: Writer seems very capable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good story and looking forward to the next chapter (Maybe chapters??) but to have a good ending,,,

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