by DragonSlayer_OK
Good story and looking forward to the next chapter (Maybe chapters??) but to have a good ending,,,
Subjectively: This story reminds me of cotton candy. Takes up a lot of space but not a lot there. Ultimately, lack of character dimensions means I won't be back. Sensual portions don't warrant coming back for those alone.
Objectively: Writer seems very capable.
You have outdone yourself, my darling...I anxiously await Chapter 3....
How long do we have to wait to see what is going to happen with David and Shauna? This story has raised a lot of questions in my own mine. THANX a million!!!!