All Comments on 'It Was Fate Ch. 02'

MORE PLEASE!!!!

Okay so first of all, this is a great chapter. Can't wait for the next one.

So is this one replacing the other story? Like a do-over? lol

I like this one so far :) The only thing I will ask is if you could make the chapters longer?

I like watching them banter with each other! hehe

How can this story be good. It's so confusing I wonder if the author himself/herself made another account and wrote the comment just to boost his/her ego.

I can't wait to read what happens next, please continue!!!

Pay no attention to the naysayers. For the person with the negative comment, don't ruin the story for the rest of us who are enjoying it.

Please, please update soon.

Both chapters i just read, and i am really enjoying this story so far. I hope that you can continue this story--despite what that other person wrote as their comment.

please finish this story i need to know how it ends

i know it's the reworked version of "fate" but somehow it feels like a totally different story. i've read "fate" and then this one. the plots on their own are good, but please, for the readers sake, get yourself an editor. doing it yourself is not doing the story any justice.

there are plenty of people who are willing to spend their time helping you, just take a look at the editor section of lit's forums.

comparing both versions it almost seems that collin and annabeth in either story are totally different people. the writing style is different as well (that is not a bad thing ;) ) i think you would have been better off making it two different stories instead of a rewritten "fate"

i will wait for next chapters.

it a little diffrenet but it is all the same awsomeness

Just read this and the previous chapter. Not bad, not good though. Needs an edit for basic typos and grammar mistakes. Unfortunately some appear consistent, for instance "your" is used when "you're" is appropriate. Looks like several other chapters have been posted, hope those were proofed!

I love you...I hate you....I love you....DAMN IT! GET YOUR CLOTHES ON!

And to think I was so happy because the grammar was so much better than in the original in the last Ch.

Maybe he's the same but, this Collin seems grumpier. It could be Annabeth that's different but, I liked the easy going relationship they had in your first rendition.