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"Sorry I went and screwed everything up."
Her finger went to my lips now. "No more saying you're sorry. It's over."
"Ok," I smiled lightly.
"I've missed you Owen."
"I've missed you too baby."
"Come to Europe with me," she whispered. "You will love it there."
"If it means being with you I'd love too. I'll go anywhere with you."
"K," she smiled.
She kissed me again. These slow and soft kisses that meant so much right now. She finally pulled herself from me and headed to the bathroom before returning. We lay there in the bed for a while and talked about the past couple of months that we had been apart. We eventually curled up and went to sleep.
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Thanks for reading. Comments always welcome.
- COMMENTS
ScottishTexanalmost 2 years agoI have to agree about the repetitions. You use "she sassed" way too much. There are times when Jamie is obviously being sarcastic and it fits very well. But there's other times when it seems like a straight reply sans sarcasm but you use it again anyway.
The sex scenes are drawn out way too far and move too slowly. I've actually started to skip over all of your sex scenes and not even read them. The meat of the story is still very good though. 4/5
Lions86over 2 years agoprob one of the first times ive actually agreed with an anon comment. you do use the same words far too often. you also have weird sentences like "i removed the shoulder straps of her dress and slid them down her shoulders" while tech not an incorrect sentence it just could sound better by saying "i slid the straps of her dress off her shoulders" or something along those lines.
shyspudabout 4 years agowow!!
so emotional, you cut me up...man, such beauty, se well written...this is by far one of the best, THE BEST stories on here, I know some critics have said some stupid comments but they do not appreciate I guess, a writer who writes with a lot of passion and a ell of a lot of emotion!
again, ten stars....
Anonymousover 4 years agoIf u don’t shut yo dummy ass up, he required the story like that? Yea ok
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoYou used the same words over and over. How many times are you going to use sassed or cheered? You make Owen sound like a fucking wussy. You've ruined a good story. By using sassed cunny and cheered. Over and over.
And who the hell drinks that much?
