All Comments on 'Jade's Special Day'

you made me laugh on page 1. "I made her brew me some coffee in just a pair of white, lacy panties,"

Wasn't that difficult to drink from?

Ah well.

Don't like the thought of any kind of a slave.

Don't stop there. You're off to a great start and we want to know what else you come up with for Jade to do...

would definitely read more, keep it up.

carry on.........you have some promise....