All Comments on 'Jonathan's Story'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Just plain awful

Your stories are shit. Plan and simple.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
not that bad

i thought it was okay. would have liked more detailed small penis humiliation

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
what a complete waste of time

a dumbass story with a dumbass ending. Don't quit your dayjob. Unless you're a writer in which case...don't write.

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