All Comments on 'L.A. in New Orleans Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Glad to see you managed to salvage this story.

In the last chapter you ran this story into a bridge abutment, when you needlessly turned it into an ugly Non-Consent story. Now you've rescued it, pulling it back on track. The point of this story is her exhibtionism. It's what she wears, and what she reveals. The sex is just a natural extension of what she's doing. Good save, with this chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
good job keep it up

dont listen to all the negitivity. It was great if those people dont like these kind of stories why do they read them. They just want to preach. Good work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
a change?

i just glanced, mostly 1st and last chapter, and thought that such experiences can change people in unexpected ways

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Wat da f z wrong with commenters.....too harsh ....

This z a gud story atl east for cuckold fans ........slow transformation z turn on.....nothing to blame......Thnx for hot story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Just crap

Just another useless cum dumpster slut diseased wife and wimpy cuck fag husband story....

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
Just anothet

Just another cuck let's boss fuck his whore more story.

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