- Romance
- Lacie Ch. 14
- Page 2
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Click hereLacie had never felt such a powerful shock. Her whole body ached as if she had worked out at the gym for hour and hours, mercilessly pushing her body far past it's limits. Lacie gently lifted her head, seeing Tyler standing only a few feet away from her, holding a tablet in his hands. The unexpected reminder of Bridget, her tablet and the home she now knew she would never see again sent Lacie's stomach crashing through the floor. She felt empty, lifeless. Quiet sobs shook her body as Lacie fought the tears, grieving for the life she had lost.
Another bolt slammed into her, the lightning making her back arch, thrusting Lacie's chest out as her head snapped back, just missing the machine behind her. Lacie's body thrashed, beyond her control, wrenching in several directions all at once, sending fire lancing through her. Lacie could smell the ozone, the stomach turning odor of burnt air crackling around her as the machine finally shut off. Lacie slumped, exhausted. Soft whimpers escaped her control. Lacie knew she was starting to crack. It just hurt so much. Gritting her teeth, Lacie swallowed the pain, ignoring her aching body's protests as she lifted her head.
"Go...to...hell." Lacie gasped, glaring at Tyler.
His bored looking eyes peered up at her. As if in response to her defiance, his fingers lightly tapped the screen of his tablet. Fire coursed through her veins as the lighting struck again, submerging Lacie's world into an ocean of pain. Finally, her body subjected to torture, her life and loves taken from her, her hopes of rescue gone, Lacie couldn't fight the agony any more.
She screamed.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 11 years agoI was a bit bummed that the chaper was so short. Do not worry about the torture because you set it up in the beginning of the plot. If people are not tnat bright to figure that out then so sad so sorry sucks to be them. Ideally Clarissa should get kidnapped by the Masters friends and left to Claire and friends to have Clarissa try out her own toys and have the videos sent to her brother so it drives him nuts......I know that is dark, but it is befitting the type of character Clarissa is and the equal justice she should get for her yang.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoCome on now. Lacie was perfect and untouched. I understand your writing and everything, but come on. Let Master be her first and hopefully and just maybe, fall in REAL love with her. So, pppllleeeaaasssee
e!!! Will be waiting on next chapter. Hurry!!!
UpHillAllabout 11 years agoI apreciate the warning, it didn't feel you were explaining yourself, it felt like you respect your readers, thank you.
I honestly can't wait to see how your story ends, what you have in mind for Lasie so keep writing please.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoPlease Please Please don't keep me waiting for the next chapter again!! :)
Anonymousabout 11 years agoWhen reading the comment you had wrote I had a terrible fear you were going to have Lacie raped. Please let her escape or be rescued before that happens. Good story though. As you have put it in Romance I am holding out for a happy ending!
