All Comments on 'Lara's Lesson Ch. 01'

Female-Female domination is one of my favorites, but this doesn't read well. You imply a lot of dialog but include almost none, and the use of the cigarette on a brand new slave is not believeable. She wouldn't put up with that kind of pain, being brand new. Sorry, the smoking thing ruined it for me.

Seduction - female style. Debi seduces Lara who becomes her willing slave. Let the training began... Great Read!

Lara had big dark nipples and Debi wanted to reach out and bite one but she stopped herself. She had to keep reminding herself that her slave was still new and she didn't want to scare her away.....

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So she burnt it with a cigarette instead and then stubbed it out on her pussy.....

All in the space of about ten minutes,...and that's after bitch slapping her hard...

I just love the realism here....