All Comments on 'Levelling the Score'

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madengineer3madengineer3about 15 years ago
Fair is Fair!

This is a wonderfully unique way to "balance the books". Getting even in a gentle manner can be wonderful tonic.

This writer is very good!

Adrian69702006Adrian69702006about 15 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Thanks for the feedback. It's much appreciated!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Fun

Even though she didn't tie him up, beat nim and then have sex with three teenagers from the neighborhood, I somehow managed to enjoy this. Well written, thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
How is this possible?...

a cute little tale that actually could happen.Where's the anger man? Where's the insecurity, the fetish, the betrayal, the hurt,the utter angst???Hee-Hee.Pistolpackinpete

Adrian69702006Adrian69702006about 15 years agoAuthor
A very English story

Thanks for your comment. I think perhaps part of the answer is that it's a very English story. There is a bit of a tradition in England - and Northern Europe generally - of responding to situations with a touch of irony and humour rather than passion necessarily.

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I am a middle aged guy from the UK who enjoys creative writing, sharing ideas, memories and anecdotes. My main fetish interests are around toilet desperation, 'holding it' and accidents. Much of my writing - at least on here - reflects that. Oh and I have a particular liki...