All Comments on 'Lilith Of Fire And Brimstone Ch. 04'

Yes, the series is quite depraved, erotic, sinfully delicious, with an imaginative and arousing plot. The humor helps, too, the story line progresses well, and the writing is engaging. However, the text is often distracting and grammatically flawed with run-on sentences, wrong words (as 'tense' for 'intense'), some misspellings (even allowing for British variations on our USA 'dialect'), and deficient punctuation. Maybe PlasticJane is dictating to voice-recognition software, and further proofing would help. Even M$ Word doesn't seem to catch many of the punctuation flaws, so an editor is highly recommended. Please do continue, though, even if you can't get an editor, as we hungry readers will persevere and enjoy!

I loved the transformation scene. Nicely done with a slow buildup.