All Comments on 'Long Distance Lovers'

I loved the story. A great start with attention to language and pacing. Good, believable romance. Now slow down and dig a little deeper and your next one will push people over the edge so that they may have to finish reading after they finish if you catch my drift. I read your profile first which tells me there are some rougher edged tales in there to be told. I look forward to reading anything you wish to submit in the future.

lee

Very descriptive, and well written. I'd like to have it stretched out a little longer, but you've covered the main points for erotica.