All Comments on 'Long Time Coming'

I loved so much about this piece as you have a hot emotional scene all laid out for you; it was well written, but I was looking for more. I missed the intensity in their meeting, the development of character for the reader, and a little bit of reasoning behind their various sexual decisions. Keep writing. Your style is very readable.

i just lived something very similisr with my best friend of 12 hours. it reminded me so nuch of our time.~blessed be

Someday I hope I get the chance to experience this...with someone like the woman in this story. WOW. Erotic, sensual and so well written. This was an excellent story!

From one Virginian to another...great story! (Richmond)