by yankeedog
We have read all 5 parts and Please do not stop now. We would like to read your nest story about the Girls Night Out. It seems Laura is getting as hot as Jane and WE know what sisters are like. The John in Japan just doesn't know what he is missing, or is he really in Japan and was Geroge called in to play the role of Dad. So many questions unanswered that you have to keep this series going.
Laura & Lisa, bi sisters @ CU
Please continue the story. Each section {Chapters 1 -5} is very hot, erotic, and interesting. It is great to fantasize about this happening to oneself. It also gives a person a feeling for what the opposite sex goes through daily mentally, emotionally, socially, psychologically, and physically.
Interesting concept and well written story. I definitely would like to have you write more. The plot is really beginning to develop as Laura accepts herself as the woman she has become. Please continue!
I found your submission to be most interesting, and well writen. I found it very stimulating and Im not too sure why. Anyway, nice job, and I hope you conbtinue.
This is a great story and you left it as a cliffhanger please give me and Laura more!
A fun and interesting tale im enjoying your style and mood . . Ty