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All Comments on 'Lord of the Castle Ch. 01'

by SthrnBelle

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
odd point of view

It was a lovely story but the third person point of view made the reading very awkward and not very appealing. It would have been better if you had told it from the point of view of the Lord.

cheers

j

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