All Comments on 'Loups Garuo'

Please is there going to be any more Please!!!!!!!!!!!!

Regards AR

Okay, so it has potential, but it was way too short and way too rushed. Take your time with it and develop the characters a bit more and you might have something here.

The storyline was fine. The grammar, lack of editing, and rushed scenes killed it. And what 18 yr old wears tacky red pvc?

I agree it was rushed, but it has possibilites. Keep up the good work

The thought behind the story was interesting, but as the others said you did rush the story line. Next story, and I hope there is a next, after you write it go back over and expand it. Build up the tension, be more descriptive, and make the sex hot! Good Luck!

could have been longer. but a good one. Thanks for sharing.

could have been longer, more detailed. had good potential, needed a lilttle more work.

This waa way rushed...... if u was looking to do a speedy one off story... u have done that but a good one no....... i read this and couldnt believe what i was reading.... this was not thought thru at all

I take it English is not your first language? You may want to get an editor and watch your wording.

I'm a sucker for a hard cock, a huge male orgasm with lots of cum and a pregnancy. Personally, I'm not so much about the bloody intercourse or the anal sex, but that's me, and far be it from me to yuck another's yum - not everyone is into what I like. The handsome man incarnation is a nice touch: demonic and vanilla in one fantasy partner.