by marie_fantasy
i JUST LOVED THIS CHAPTER. i REALLY CANNOT WAIT TO READ THE OTHERS. KEEP IT UP
and I really hate waiting. It truly is the best and worst of reading a story. Being excited that more is coming and being mad at having to wait for the next part, well this chapter was worth the wait. You left me at chapter 5 w/jade eyes and now you leave me w/being stabbed only it's not me. Again I will wait, but not to long I hope. hehe he
I love it, can not wait for the next one. It s a cliff hanger, suspense around the corner ,your really good at it.
Loved the ending! I really can't wait to see what she is and why her mother was hunted and why she's coming to her. I have a feeling she's going to be one of the druids that are thought to not live anymore. Can't wait to see.
The only thing that surprised me was that she never said 'you're a vampire' or asked what he was.
I hate when a guy is so blind to a manipulative Bitch...ie- Hildie
Some of the transitions were a little abrupt and I didn't know if it was a dream or real life at first. A little more indication of that would be great.
and give us the next chapter! Love this story and your style. Keep up the great work :-D
Is she re-living her mother's death? It's all so mysterious!
What's going on? Is she dreaming? You seem to have trouble going from scene to scene. Try to indicate a new scene.