All Comments on 'Lynne Changes Her Life Ch. 02'

by Risktaker48

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
A beautiful ending would be

IF only someone had some nice battery acid to pour on both of pieces of shit. Right square on their genitals. Their screams would be the best music of the night.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Lame again. Very, very Lame. A cheating bitch/whore like this needs to be single not married.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
I would like one of these stories

to begin, "I am a selfish bitch. My husband cannot satisfy me - of course I do not tell him because who knows he might try to improve - so instead I will divorce him and find a man who can satisfy my needs in bed and out. Like I said, I am selfish and not loving and caring partner. My needs come first, second and third. My husband is a money factory for me so I can have the life I want. Yes I lie to him and say how great he is. Now with the divorce I can find a man to meet my needs."

26thNC26thNCalmost 4 years ago

Not impressed, and compared to other comments, that's gentle.

mattenwmattenwalmost 4 years ago

I wish that women who act like your protagonist become infected with HIV and suffer a slow and painful death!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

ONE STAR more garbage

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I've finally started finishing some new stories (too many plot lines in my head), hopefully I will start completing more soon. Most of my writing is fantasy stories at the moment some are based on my own experiences. You dear reader will have to work out which! Thanks in advan...