by Mushrum
I had fun reading this little story. I moved quickly and as a matter of fact i wish it was longer. I hope there is a part two.
Just a question to the guy who though this was sick. Why didn't you stop reading the story?
I don't normally like the "magic" or similar stories, but I definitely liked this one. You have a very good writing style, and led smoothly into the "climax" of the text. I hope you'll write more, with even more detail.
I've written some stories here also, and can tell you from experience--ignore Mr. Anonymous. I've decided that it is probably the same loser leaving multiple complaints on a story just to bring down the author and the story's rating. I suggest deleting them from the post. As evidence of this, I looked back at a story I wrote many months ago and found that in August there were suddenly a half dozen different posts from Mr. Anonymous telling me how stupid the story was. It was pretty obvious.
Keep up the good work!
Keep up the good work. Hope there is a part 2. Pay no attention to Mrs. Grundy's comments.
why try to make a magic amulet silk purse out of this boring, anodyne sow's ear of a cuck story?
Anyone who hasn't signed up for an account can post as "anonymous". So there are several persons posting with that tag. You can tell this quite easily by just reading the style in which people write - it's very hard to write consistently in a style not your own.
This story? The amulet doesn't add anything to the story, so there doesn't seem to be any point in the account of the purchase.