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Anonymousover 18 years agoSo similar
Wow quite a story.. I loved it because I am about to do the same thing...only not with a hubby. Some guy is going to pay me $100 to photograph me for two hours and your story has given me some really great ideas how I can pose.. thanks.
Anonymousover 18 years agogood story line
what an awesome story.....i think the shower scene was the best.
norcal62over 13 years agoLiked the story. Some work on more complex sentences would help.
Also, look at contractions to smooth conversational dialog flow.
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoZorro ??!?? Zorro ????? !!!!!!
What does it says about the mentality of this writer ??
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