All Comments on 'Mary at Night Ch. 04'

To many opportunities were wasted, in building up Mary's character! Now a fully fledged nudist regardless of reasoning, exciting spectators with a full frontal glimpses of her shaven genitalia, presents no future difficulty? Perhaps future tales, as well-paid strip-tease or sex show artiste, can be illustrated or written about. Best of luck, with readership votes.

I have just read all of the 'Mary at Night' series and your first series, 'Mary's Naked Camp Adventure'. Not exactly my cup of tea, but not boring either. Even though your spelling and grammar sometimes leave something to be desired, (please - its 'sight', not 'site'), your story telling is first rate.

Comments such as those appended to '... Camp ...' 01 & 02, dated 4/24/11 from 'Anonymous', beginning 'You wrote' and ending 'Fucking moron!' are an unfortunate part of being an author on sites such as this. If my vocabulary was so weak as to require me to use gutter expletives, I wouldn't want my name known either.

What is important is that you tell a good story. I imagined myself as the truck driver in '... Night ...' 04. I fantasize about girls of that age 'accidentally' flashing me.

Keep writing. Your fans will be disappointed if you don't.

These are so good. Thank you😀