All Comments on 'Mason Ch. 04'

Five stars - as usual! You are an excellent story writer. Thank you for the time and care you obviously give to each story that you write. It is a wonderful gift to be able to read your stories online for free.

Oh so good, i love this story more please

Loved the chapter

I cry for Toni and James there so good together.

Great update.

As for Mason I like him but he needs someone that's not Toni. Some other sista:)

in my heart i'm like...GOD WHY DOES TONI HAVE TO BE HIS MATE?

I dont know what to think? seems like everything is getting pulled further apart at least in mason's case. ummm

I just love how everything is flowing together in this story. Although Mason is still not with his mate I loved how you got Eustace and Gretchen together. You are a wonderful writer. Now I'm off to read more of your latest updates.

Happy writing.

I love Mason how moral he is. He's not just going to rush in and take what he feels is his. I do wonder how and what age Toni & Mason will once again meet up?

So much time being wasted. All b/c he couldn't let go.

Good story. Can't wait to read the rest.

I don't know if its me or what. It seems like something is missing in the story. The thought of James & Toni peeve me much, for I find Toni only stick around wasting her time just because she feel guilty. She always find a no good of an excuse or reason to still stick with James that its ridiculous! Anyhow, other than the James & Toni situation the whole story up til this chapter is Awesomeness! Hope you update more soon! :) Haha...

Mason continues to learn and grow as a person. He needed that. I believe that Toni did, too.

James, with his total love and devotion to Toni, was instrumental in teaching Toni to love, share, and be a true partner. whenever it eventually happens, Mason and Toni stood very little chance of makng a relationship work otherwise.

I love the idea of Toni and James still starting a family by having a baby through adoption!!

Truly Awesome!!

Great update really enjoyed it too it was so sweet of Mason to introduce Eustace to Gretchen so at least they will have someone too can't wait to see what will happen with Mason next and hopefully things will start to look up for him please update soon thanks!!

I'm confuzzled!

what are you confused about?

This is a great story.

I read Ethan and Kane after you completed them and I found them to be womderful. Usually I do not read nonhuman stories, but your stories got me hooked. I don't read stories until they are complete. I have being waiting patiently for u to finish this story b4 I read it. So please finish writing this story.

thankful that James did not die and that Gretchen and Eustace are together at last (hopefully they are mates and can stop looking!)

We just need to get Mason mated and move on to more great stories from you-Keep it up...

Thank you for not killing James!