All Comments on 'Meeting Bob Ch. 01'

that would be anything more than unpleasant. Poorly written and with the kind of errors that really jar on the reader.

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With wife sharing and being a wimp , we see you have never change even with the blue bomb you are still the wimp

Not a single word of dialogue. Total narrative and description. Telling the audience (usually the Bull) what is being said is NOT dialogue! It IS boring and unrealistic, and difficult for the reader to get vicariously involved!

The author makes DRAMATIC errors, such as using 'know' rather than 'no!' Perhaps it is the belief that more letters makes 'no' more emphatic? There are a host of similar errors! Maybe it is an old version of 'voice recognition' software?

2* (because I save the 'one bomb' for insincere submissions!)

the black man standing there took a look and got sick.