All Comments on 'Melting the Ice Princess Ch. 01'

From the very first sentence: "You and I are co-workers." If we were co-workers, I'd know that, wouldn't I? So why are you telling me something that's blaringly obvious? Do you think that I'm that stupid? Author, your choice of perspective immediately gave me a negative attitude toward this story.

Great, Can't wait for part chapter 2. Keep up the good work