All Comments on 'Midnight Mischief'

Another silly story with very little erotica. So who cares if a husband bangs his wife? Silly!

A welcome change from the usual cheating wife story, a catagory that Lit should consider adding by the way. As a reader I'd prefer to have the seperate catagories.

This story has great imaginative prowess and the underlying love between them is almost touchable. I really liked it!

Most readers are sick of the cheating wife/wimp husband stories that abound on Literotica.

Don't worry about a few anonymous knockers, keep writing like this.

A nice sweaty story. Perfect for the current weather patterns.

Well written, punchy and just a bit naughty.

First submission and really hot & very exciting! Hope to see more...you have a talent and a passion that is felt through your words...keep it up...I am sure your stories will get even BETTER!

Keep up the good work.

As with most of the comments concerning this story, THIS is what the "Loving Wives" category should be about - not the "cheating slut/wife - wimp cuckold husband" story.

Stories like this is what I EXPECT to read about in this category.

More writing like this is what I look forward to at this website.

Hot Married Sex Fantasy! MORE! MORE! MORE!

It is nice change of pace to have a story with a loving couple in it. A lot of us are tired of the slut, wimp and cuckold stories. NO MORE WIMPS!

Well paced and v. naughty! An auspicious beginning to a hopefully long and wet career :P

I'm looking out for the next one! What will it be.. ;)

One thing that I'm really sick of seeing on Literotica are the cheating wives stories, they just aren't interesting in the least bit. Keep up the good work.

Lovely use of imagery, well written and enjoyable. Please write more.

Hey you!

very well structured story. the fantasy is hot hot hot. the description of her handling herself is beautiful.

esl

Wonderfully warm and loving story. Its obvious that you have experianced these feelings. Your lover is sure to be the big benifactor here.

Sweet, succinct, and nicely closed, this is a lovely piece with a luscious, sensual feel to it. It's a great example of a "snapshot" of an erotic moment that communicates its power swiftly but without being simplistic or rushed. Lovely work and a delightful read.

You did a brilliant job describing her thoughts, and switching from what she was doing, back to her fantasy.

Great job, and don't let this be your last!! ;-)

Very nicely written!

Shaun best hurry home.