All Comments on 'Minnie and the Newlyweds Ch. 09'

The best part of my day is reading the newest chapter in this story. Thank you for continuing.

Read this complete story on another site and again here. Loved it both times and the character development is very good...however, you never continued it. that is a critical flaw...hopefully you will not let that happen here. Your audience would be greatly disappointed.

many thanks for the work thus far.

Finally. Chapter 9. Been waiting for you to continue this for several months now. Please do so soon. The story so far is "happily entertaining". Good character developments, layered over and over as the story builds. Interesting! Would not mind this going a bit darker or even more "serious". Very well focused on the principal characters, few diversions. I like that. Keeps the readers rooting for "Minnie" or "the Newlyweds" - as the title suggests.