All Comments on 'Moonbeam's Training - Anal Sex'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Lovely story

I wasn't exactly in the moment with the characters, but it did feel intimate. Only one or two typos and some odd capitalization of "T" words, but nothing too distracting. Overall, a very good effort. Best wishes on your journey.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
I hope that when asshole is using the asshole

and/or the vagina of the victim that he doesn't forget which he used last--Using vagina after using the shithole without a through cleaning can produce unpleasant resultsfor both raper and victim

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