All Comments on 'Mr. Right? Ch. 03'

very unusual for literotica. Most generally it is at least a 12" beer can sized, purple mushroomed head black cock plowing a married white woman.

Very Refreshing indeed.

Things keep getting interesting with these two. Maybe they will make it.

I was Matt (swinging bachelor)once,

that`s why I`m single 32 yo. This takes me back .... Great story.

I love the way the story is progressing. Its still alluring and capitvating. This is a good thing since everyone is still dressed. Definitely a story that is series worthy.

Want them to get together, but hope Kathy will understand.

Very good so far...

I like it with the exception of her saying "puddin" but that's just a personal thing for me. Ugh makes my skin crawl but I still give your story a five because its awesome... I love the characters. I love Staci, I love the fact that she's a dark skinned black woman.So you absolutely get fives all around but that puddin thing does make me want to puke. Hey I'm from the south and it brings back bad memories, lol.

Men just don't understand how women think. They make us pause and for good reason. Matt is sexy aggressive which is scintillating, but he has to show Ana he is for real.

Matt has the right instincts but sabotages himself with words (that oddly enough arouse Staci). I'm intrigued and you write well, with how you include drama and suspense at the right times (like with Anthony/Matt and Staci/Kathy). I'm looking forward to reading more. :)