All Comments on 'My Introduction To CFNM Ch. 01'

Oh yes. we're going to need to have more on this one.

Excellent writing & plot. Eagerly anticipating the latter part. Hope that it won't be anti -climax though. To be honest...i was more turned on when i read Pg 1 compared to the 2nd & 3rd. Its the anticipation that fuels me with lustful passion & i do have the desire to experience CFNM...take care!

Looking forward to the next chapter

I like it. I think the pace is slow but I think the slow pace makes for better reading. Some of us actually do read, you know. This left me wanting more, so bring it on. Maybe I'll get my boss to try some CFNM with me - he's got a nice butt!

What woman wouldn't want to see a nice naked man? I sure as heck would. Cute story and I'll be watching for more.

You really did it with this one. It was a hard read, no pun intended. Of course I put myself in the place of Sharon, and of course I know it's not me, but with the history, well, it was inevitable. It evoked much more emotion than I expected which surprised me. It was another fabulous piece of writing from you which didn't. Thank you for sharing this with me. Such an incredibly erotic scenario!!

Great tale.. well told.<br><br>

I liked the pace, it brought up my arousal slowly, which I love and I really liked the way you built that emotional connection between the two!!

of your work evolves higher from, for the want of a better term, dominant/subservient through equivalency to mutual adoration--a loving duet. You are not among the best merely the very best writer of erotica that I, in my far ranging searches, have found: without peer. Please do continue this tread but don't let us down on "A Mother's Promise."

jjws%

I love your writing, PBP. I almost gave one of your stories to my little sister but chickened out. But, she's going to get this one because I know her beefcake neighbor is a closet exhibitionist. I bet we can have him naked in less than an hour. Shhh, don't tell him!

I'll be watching for the next chapter or two.

You've added an emotional element to what is actually a "visual" enticement for a female. (I say visual because it's like a guy jacking off to a Playboy picture: all visual.) I've lived the reality of this CFNM scenario and, believe me, we shared no real depth of an emotional connection. She loved watching from different angles, she loved watching from behind, she loved watching "excercises", she loved watching my balls move and bounce, and she always wanted to "see it cum for her." I think you write a pretty good story though.

Ron

As good as the writing was, the subject weakling almost a man drags down your effort. <P>

Do you actually get excited by this woman's fantasy of a submissive into helpless exhibition?<P>

The raves on your talent are misleading unless most of them are women or males into self humiliation. Which do you think it is and why do you pander to them?<P>

A puzzling waste of talent in many ways.

Way hott!

PBP

You have really topped yourself. What a fun build up and so stimulating imagining it happening. In real life, hope she reads the story or it cums true. Can't wait for the next adventure with Sharron.

Great work as always PBP.I"m still waiting for A Mothers Promise Ch 13.Thanks again.

Wow. What a de javu! I went to Chico State Universty 6 years ago. The sorority I belonged to had a party every year where some of the frat guys would come over. Each of the girls would pick a guy and it was tradition that the guy would strip and then masturbate for the girl. I guess it's been going on since the 70's or something like that. I was there for 3 years and I can tell you honestly that I had three guys take their clothes off and do it right in front of me. OMG that was so much fun. It's probably one of the most vivid memories I have from college and it has remained one of my favorite fantasies.

Good job on this story. I'll read some more of your postings.

OMG OMG OMG. Unbelieveable story. This is the hottest thing I have ever read. I am spechless and you are a good writer. OMG!

I can't wait to read the second part to the story.

No need to apologize for the slow start. The way you slowly build up your stories is the reason they are all Literotica "Hot" stories!!

This is a good story. It's very erotic and exciting and the writing is top notch. This writer has a remarkable ability to bring a vision to life. However, this story isn't real CFNM. In real CFNM, the female(s) never undress. They don't show anything intentionally. And they don't show off their panties! I don't want to harp on that because I think the story is hot and anything having to do with CFNM is good. So, my good man, keep on.

I can't wait to hear about Saturday. Maybe it will last all weekend long.

That was a great story. You have to give us Chapter 2!!!!

Please more & maybe it'll help the 'cause'?

I've read your other stories and loved each and every one. I've always fantasized and almost rubbed myself raw dreaming about having a man naked around me and having him play with himself for my enjoyment and without strings attached. The whole idea CFNM makes me wetter that hell. Damn good story and please write more on this one.

Positively erotic and very believable. Just one very big omission to point out: Where the hell is the nipple?!

First time I've read a CFNM story. I have a long time buddy who has an exhibitionist trait and never truly understood why. I'm more the voyeur.

Your story writing is very good, plus this is giving me an appreciation of the other side of things.

stick to playing ball......LOL

please write more

known this to happen to many people I know, not the sex, but being oblivious to what's going on around them.

Subject matter not my cup of tea. Pure drivel.

Loved the story. Well written and had me hoping and wanting more as I read it. Wow.

I'll bet our boy ends up entertaining Sharon and some of her friends. Like a suprise party after he's stripped off.

Love it. I love CFNM stories, Thank you

Slow beginning but great story overall

Suggestion- learn the difference between mute and moot

Yessssss ... This is what CFNM is all about ...

Standing naked in a window getting a hand job from her and not knowing who might pass by and watch.

She and I in the woods and not knowing who might come along.

Seeing the School Mistress, getting caught be her reading her magazines, asked to strip, getting spanked and never knowing who might come into her office during her handjob.

Please many more of those ... !!!

Can't wait to read the next parts ...

Nice. IDK how this relationship will develop but I want to find out. Playing with development of love and lust nice touch. Moved my emotions and my penis.