All Comments on 'My Own Heaven Ch. 20'

The longer this story goes on the more unbelievable it becomes. Hours naked in the snow and no frostbite .Not going to read this any more

Good is the most brief and clean way I can think to say it. The scene at the end was what made the chapter. Very very well done. Kudos.

Yes, the things that happen to "Heather" actually happened (Read: were done) to me. I don't know where "Keith" comes up with his ideas and gadgets, but I'll continue with my story and as long as my "Keith" keeps doing things to me, I'll keep writing.

i dont know you do it.the only way is.....yo must have had a good time DOING IT

I love Keith's creativity in "torturing" Heather. I don't know how you're able to invent these things, but please keep them (and us) coming!

I enjoyed all that Heather and Tina went through and the writing style was enjoyable also not merely sex and domination but a storyline as well great show thank you girl.

I love these stories. The situations Heather and Tina find themselves in are so different from other stories. I am tempted to show them to my husband, but I know he'll want to do those things to me. I'm sure I would love it but, WOW, could I stand having those things done to me. So, my question is: Dani, did the things in your stories really happen to you or are they your fantasies?