All Comments on 'Natalie Ch. 05'

please hurry with the next one

Want more cant wait for the next ch.

Using Ronnie to get to Nat sucks!!!!

An age old trick for sure, but still low down dirty.

Looking forward to the next installment.

dammit i knew that he was gonna use ronnie :( oh well , keen for the next chapter :D

Yes,it was an open invitation for him to use the friend as bait,friends are good for that,lol,,,,its a good story,i like the little twist of being a witch,its not like being a dormant were or unknown other ,keep up the good work,and work on your spell check and grammer.A little longer chapters would be great also.Thanks.

And I'm enjoying it so far :)

Are you getting your Irish from online dictionaries ;)? Irish grammar is a little different to English, it's put in the wrong way in some cases, so saying she's a naughty girl when translated from Irish would actually be, are bad girl you (is cailin dána tú). Anyway fun read!

I am so glad you came back to finish this story......can't wait for the next chapter. Please hurry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

A bit short and a bit predictable but I like where you are going with it. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.

nice story i found myself enjoying it very much, I can't wait to see what happens next.