All Comments on '"Ohhh...Mommy," I Groaned'

I loved the story, the flow was perfect very hot

Lovely, truly lovely. Thank you.

The flow was well done. I was never bored. The sensuality was just as amazing, but the best part of all of it was the dialog perfectly matching the intended personalities. None of them stepped out of character to suddenly 1-up the scene to get sensual. I rarely see stories on this site that keep that realism the whole way through.

The one other detail that has made this such an astounding read, is the stretch of description for sexual acts. It doesn't get repetitive or monotonous in the least! There was amazing description from an anatomical standpoint that even most quality pornography can't get touch. You cover the thoughts, the sounds and all the wonder of the sexy and amazing processes of the body during arousal and intercourse.

This is the type of work I always strive for myself, and until now I had always assumed no one wanted these aspects included in the writing as much as I always have.

Thank you for the inspiration, the great story, the realism and the joy I got from reading this. Not to mention that I love how long it is. (Bigger IS better. lol)

This was a really good story. I like how u cut the scene at different points which led to a better overall effect. It got really unrealistic in the end having two wives and ur mom having your baby..... bit weird but still good

Absolutely awesome!

Super story!!

nice story this is the second time i've read it i enjoyed it again

An excellent story! Cautious but daring, innocent but lustful, with just the right amount of common sense & reasoning woven in. Keep up the good work.

i've read a few of your stories and the ones i've currently read have all been to high standard such as this one.

i thought it was wonderful how he also still loved his mother as a women even after he was just with his sister.

i wouldn't personally change anything with this story to improve it :)

5/5

leebrookes@live.com

So i've never fingired myself more in such a time of 45 mins...

i have never taken that much pleasure in a book before lol

This is still and will always be one of my favorite stories. wonderful book

A clear winner among the erotic strories I have read till now.I always thought that I'd write my first feedback when I find the best story.

I am going to bookmark this story.

Thank you so very much......

Anirban from India

Outstanding ! I've read many stories similar to this, but this is by far the best. I loved the fact that it was detailed and very convincing. I would read this story over and over and over again. It is truly my honor to say that I love this story and I'm happy and fortunate to stumble upon it. I've orgasmed numerous times just fantasizing about Bobbly and his love for his mother and sister.

This is the best written story i have read it a while it rivals twilight keep up the good work and i hope your write more.

I believe this story is the best story of it kind I have ever read. It was so good, I think I will try to write a story too. I have never written anything before but I will give it a try.

Thanks. Herb

I am in LOVE with this story. It is the first story that I had an orgasam just reading!!!! I loved it so much!! I will be thinking about this story and the characters for a VERY loooong time!! :) Thank you!

Wow!! This story was unbelievably amazing. I got so wet while reading it. It was very well written. I give it two cocks up!

i have to say that i was so hard whilst reading this story, i could not stop thinking about bobby fucking his mother and sister, was a really good story.

Hot

In all seriousness, my wife of two months insists that I piss on her standing in the tub before we have sex. I don't know if this is something going around but she says that it prepares her better for sex? I refuse to do it and now she won't let me touch her! Maybe somebody has an answer?

For christ sakes just piss on her why wouldn't you do do you know how.hot that is. God i wish my girlfriend would ask me that.

Piss all over the bitch. Make her open her mouth and fill it with your steamy piss. Then put her over your knee and spank her until she cries. Then check how wet her pussy is. She wants you to humiliate her, to dominate her, to be your slut for a while.

You lucky, lucky boy.

All I can say is WOW! I've been reading these types of stories for about 5 years now...and I have to say that this is by far one of, if not the best one I have ever read! Not only was it a good story but the way it was written was just awesome, and the details too...I felt like I was actually there!

Really enjoyed it and well wrote to

This was a great story. I have read many stories and some of them are good, but the way this story was written and planned was just magnificant.

Very hot, tender and loving story. Please write more like this. "Nobody loves you like family..." my mom and her younger sister always told me after cumming...

the story was awsome

it had a could begging and middle and a great ending it kept wanting know more when i read it so i kept reading and reading i dont noraly read stories like this but it was really awsome for any story that ive read and i was wondering if you were do any more like this if so i look forward to reading

I'm the jealous type so I wouldn't have done that. I would be jealous of my mom. One of the best I have read on here though. Keep writing. Good begining middle and end.

i love this story and wished there was more to what happens

I Loved the story, I want more just like it.

U should write more. That got me so hot!

i wish this would happen to me and my mom and sister. i didnt even have to touch myself and im hard as a rock

This was without doubt the best story I've read...AMAZING!!

That was amazing... Provided the release I longed for.

You are definatly one hell of writer!! Excellent work.

As you write, do these stories cum to you or u have to think about them?

Pure garbage. Couldn't get through the first page. And all those anon comments praising it for it's glory have GOT to all belong to this writer. This was crap, people.

Very well crafted. In fact, I loved it. Never mind the "nay sayers" who, on the whole, are often jealous because they do not have your gift or the guts to submit. When you feel confident enough or get enough mental material, I would love to see you submit a serial with this kind of erotic imagery and energy. My only urging is that you write in genres you feel confident enough to submit in; This one is an obviously natural fit. I will be submitting again- after many years. Bona Fortuna.

Incest isn't my usual fantasy, but I really got into this one. Good work hope to see more.

This is beyond disgusting. Beyond the incest, but marrying them! OMG i nearly puked.

Terrific story - even a bit plausible - any more like this ?

It was amazing well done a little odd but a traffic love story and I love the detail put in to it I can see every little thing gratly done

I really liked the story! The only problem with it, is that there is no resistance, everyone just goes with everything! It's a fairly simple concept; mother, daughter/sister, and brother/son just want to have sex with each other. The part I disliked the most is the the fact that in the end Bobby gets together with BOTH the mom and sister! The stupidest part is when he MARRIES both of them! Come on! Seriously! Either way it's really well written and only has a few errors with spelling and certain parts of the plot. Great story!!! :/

Damn, this made me soooo horny...

I need to empty my big balls now. let me cum inside your cunt-I need to fuck you, now!!

doesnt anyone else see how messed up this is?

i need a dick inside me now. holy shit i just had an orgasm damn that felt good

Pleasure to read...escapism. So what. Enjoyed it..... even spelling and

grammer.

This was wacked-out.

and this certainly is one!!! did not expect a romantic ending but thats fine,,very well written, even the grammar,no extraneous 4-letter words to cheapen the dialogue,,,i was totally engrossed!! a fun and erotic read,,kept my libido up!! more please!!

Nice story with a happy ending .

Excellent read!!! Had me rooted to the computer screen for three pages. Had me going in 4 minutes after reading the second page.

Nice story but who the fuck has a baby with his own momand sister??? And marries them?!?!?

Great storie, had me touching myself, but I would never do that with my kid or brother...

aweosme story...I dont knw abt others but I do have incestous relationship with my own sister....its worth trying...

love the story you should make a sequel

That was a great sex read.

Loved reading the story and I agree with the earlier comment you really should write a sequal to this story

Fingers roaming...

i only like the brother and sister connection, how could he leave patty in the bed for his mother?! i only wanted them 2 to be together. Other than that, i loved!

thanks for the fantasy orgasm ... was sooo hot! I made quite a big mess.

U should let bobby fuck his daughter and let patty give birth to a son who later fucks his mom n grandmom. That wud b lovely;)

As always a great story, I haven't found one of your stories that's not interesting and pulls me in. Thank You for your time and effort.

The bakground you give in your story really helps to get the reader engrossed in the story. Its something most writers fail to realize. I appreciate your stories they're very good.

this was a great story. there should definitely be a second chapter to this. make the story move along.

this was actually a good story not just a porno x)

Although seemingly finalized, it is not and you have such great characters and relationships here, we need more from you........

this is one of the best i have read in a long time

thank you and keep up the grreat work

I like your writing style. Flowing, sensitive. You took content that could be considered wrong, and made it loving, not 'gross.' ;)

Great story,great characters,really interesting style of writing,and very enriching.Thank you,and you should absolutely write a second part

Yes you certainly made it seem real to me Keep writing it's worth the read and pleasure it gives.

With such a controversial subject, it's difficult to produce something that sounds almost normal. You shouldd consider becoming an author of erotic novels. They would fly off the shelves!

Very nicely done. I could have done without the part where they all share a blunt (smoking is my biggest turn off), but everything else was a pleasant read. :)

Well written, enjoyed the story very much thankyou. Could of done without the whole marriage thing, I didn't really like that bit but that's just my personal opinion! 5/5

This was a very good story. It was well written and kept the readers interest no matter what happened!

One thing people seem to forget is men and women are attracted to each other sexually no matter if you find the other person physically attracted (whether you are related to them or not). Most will not do anything about those feelings in they person is living under the same roof but you cannot deny the attraction...

Awesome read...

I liked your story. The only problem I have is that there may be a problem with the children you produce with your mother and sister. It's a gentic thing.

As a registered nurse for over 40 years let me clear up this genetic thing: It is only in the third or fourth generation of incest that the deformities, brain degeneration, extra or missing fingers or toes etc. begin to appear and not always then. If there is something minutely wrong in their gene system it usually shows up in the third or fourth generation. IMHO.

im an older man a grandad actually my daughter is 31 and granddaughter is 12 i have fucked my daughter since she was 14 and anm now thinking of fucking my granddaughter.have seen her naked and get very hard . love her sweet bum cheeks and hope to soon spread the and penetrate her asshole.

This is a hugely erotic story. Superbly well written and a great "builder" to the sensual ending.

I have read this story before and it remains on of the best. Thank you for a good read.

This story is a great read... It kept me interested all the way through... I love the way the relationships developed... Would love to read a follow up story... Maybe Bobby could have Stephanie...??? Or Stephanie could have Aunt Patty... Or maybe even an orgy lol

i came almost 10 times while reading this!

I read this story earlier and just had to read it again.It was cool at the end as u talked about how they lived after they married.Make another one.I will remember this story forever.

this was a wonderful storie

Very well written and enjoyable to read. I must say the notion of adult incest is an intriguing one, especdially where there is genuine love with it. Keep up the good work.

i would have liked to seen the women eating each other.

It was very good and I plan on keeping this bookmarked/favorited on my browsers. I did notice one largely noticable error Bobby's name changed to Jimmy for a line lol, I understand if you wanted to add your name into it. Keep up the good work, I'll be reading more of your stories shortly.

I think he should pound his baby maker into mom's crap box and fill her with his jizz :-)

i really enjoyed your story it was one of the best i had ever read please continue to write more

First class story, one of the best of its type.

I've just started writing, but have never read anyone else's work before.

You've ruined me. No one else will compare to this hot story Sweetheart!

Warm Regards and Happy Holidays!

Taylor (1MS)

very good story but needed some anal actions

you should makena sequel to this story! it was very entertaining

Excellent story, but I'd like a sequel (or two). I like that it's not just about fucking but about love and commitment.

I cum so fucking bad ohh

It was...interesting. Kinda messed up and reminded me of the backwoods a bit, the incest isn't as exciting when it's not taboo sneaky--and this story was completely the opposite of those two words.

very hot *fans self* ;)

I wish this was me!

U people are wierd...

I say that this is one of the best stories i have evwr read. I wouldnt do incest myself, but i think this story desrves more then a five. Keep writing like this and u will go big my friend. It had good romantic scenes, loving moments and conflict, i hope to read more from this author.