All Comments on '"Ohhh...Mommy," I Groaned'

This Was Absolutely Amazing. I Loved Every Word Of It... Though There Were Several Grammatical Mistakes, I Don't Think That They Took Away From The Story. In My Mind, This Wasn't Just Simple Erotica, This Was Like A Short Story With Some Sex In It... The Character Developments Were Done Very Well, N' The Content (Non-Sexual One) Was Written Superbly. Great Work. I Think You Should Write Another Story Like This. Maybe Even Continue On This One. Again, Great Work, Loved It.

LOVVVEEDDD IT

-lizzy

This was one of the best erotic stories I've ever read, you gave exactly what every erotic tale needs, but sadly most lack, and that's detail, i could picture every moment, and that's what a reader needs, plus I'm an incest fan, so big kudos for that too, lol, keep writing, your great at it!

I have never been so turned on. Please, please write more.

Es una fabulosa historia, porque no puede una persona amar a quien está cerca suyo, realmente buscó la solución para vivir sin problemas sociales y disfrutar de ese excelente y superior amor. Porque debe ser prohibido, ya peino canas y siempre reclamo a mi madre, años ha fallecida, porque no me enseño a amar, en vez de constreñirme. Felicidades es la mejor historia de incesto que he leido.

how much time do you spend writing your own reviews author? lol reviews must be fake because the story sure is. awful stuff worse than 70s porn.

Other than the grammatical errors this is an absolute must read. There are few who can put this kind of visual experience into words. You can literally see everything that's taking place in the story.

You're a wonderful story teller. It was so easy to let my imagination run wild as I visualized everything.

The story line is fine. But the grammar and spelling mistakes made it difficult to read. The cliches made it sound second rate.

Now, say these two words aloud:

Bobbbbbby

Boooobby

When speaking and lengthening the word being spoken, it's the vowels that are extended, not the consonants.

I think i've read about all the stories posted and this is definatly one of the best, well written and great detail.keep'em coming.. thank you

U know I really didn't think I would like a story such as this but I didn't know I had a freaky side ether this story was sexy and a huge turn on u could imagine every party of the story keep up the good work

iloved it it was graet well bobby marry his dathger/

Well written, I like it alot!

it was toooo gooooood i was completely turned on

I loved it. It has to be the best story I ever read. I love the fact you are all in love with each other. And that there was no force or minipulation. Just LOVE. Thank you

which I enjoyed reading despite all the typo's and grammar.

The sex was good too without being over the top or in your face constantly like some stories. Well done - may I suggest you do a spell check when you write, that way you will eliminate the errors.

Really enjoyed this story, managed to hold off until the end before I relieved my aching wet pussy! Such a wonderful idea of consensual loving incest. Here's hoping he continues the beautiful love with his ownn offspring so they become a family who fucks together xxx

I loved it u should write more like this!!!

...on the fact he'd've knocked up his sister first... & I'd've LOST!

omg i had my girlfriend fuck me up down and sideways after i read this and right now she is sucking the fuck out of my dick!!! i loved it!!! now i must get back to punishing my naughty little girlfriend!!!

This story gave me the best orgasm ever. Bobby seems so hawt!! Good jobbbbb.

i loved the story if you ever write a sequel you need to tell me

THIS STORY MADE ME HORNY AND HOT. I LOVED IT

i was so horny when i was reading this i was touching and stroking myself the whole way through. i recommend some sort of spellcheck though but apart from that the horniest a story has made me so far :D

I loved the story! This is the way family incest should be, tender, loving and not forced...just the way mine was, although I didn't impregnate my mom or my sister, but I did marry one of my hot cousins. We teach our kids about everything else, why not sex and by someone who loves them?

Please write more as the family grows and ages.

Your story is perfection. Every boys wish to fuck his mother and sister

Oh, yeah, this was very nice. Just the right amount of buildup and terrific sex. What a great fantasy.

that was amazing.......... WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thismade me soo horny it was one of the best stories I ever read

One of the best stories I have read on literotica

Absolutely loved the story. Write more, include more dialog. And yes, every boy wants to fuck his mother and sister. Done in this loving way...it's natural...

Really good story... made me a little horny...

what a fucking wonderful story . makes me look at my step sister in a new light hmmm wonder if i could have her too???

i love this story. its pretty much the bar for any erotic story i read.

this story was not just all about sex, it also had meaning. very well written =].

This is a very pleasurable story. I just wish that Bobby didn't rush things with Patty. A little foreplay would have been wonderful, too. I look forward to reading more of your stories

This is truly an amazing story... What really would have been icing on the cake would have been a detailed menage e trois between the 3 lovers.... You did elude to it but its not being there was badly felt, atleast by me.....

But even then a 5 Star effort....

i wish i was like that with my mum and sis but sadly.... I hav a bro

It is an elegant, yet a structured event of life that is wonderful to read and too let your mind and imagination adapt to. Thank you

best story I have read on here. simply amazing!!!

simply that ...it was amazing

this, the second of your stories. I selected your works because you write about my favorite subject, incest/taboo, and you seem to do it quite well and with regularity. I'd like to say that you are inspiring me to follow your story line in real life, but I have no sisters, and mom's long gone. So, the best I can do is fantasize about sisters-in-law or neighbors (not really incest, but certainly taboo). If the remainder of your70 plus stories are as hot as the first two, I'm going to have a worn out member and a sticky chair seat. I'll be reading in an acrostic manner down the list as that is the best way for me to keep track of what I've read. Thanks for your work, its sensuality, and imagination. I'm looking forward to each new adventure.

I have read this 6+ times, and I know it will remain one of my favorites for times to come. Bravo!

best story i've ever read..

quite simply one of the best things ive ever read. Its above these other stories which are just a quick wank, this is more intimate, its not just about sex its almost a life story, an adventure. its brilliant, you've created some fantastic characters and u clearly have a talent for writing. If i was you i would seriously look into writing more conventional stuff because you could genuinly make a career out of this.

beautiful story..i love this writer always a good read ...story line is sweet and beautiful

I really enjoyed this story - thank you for taking the trouble to post it

good but the end was screwy htey couldn't live as a man his wife and her mother because the mother has the same last name as the guy it would have to be a mna his wife and his mother that is the only way it would workout watch out for these little goofs and use an editor

seriously just awful.. incest can be done well, but this was pure fluff with no edge. I suppose the internet is full of purple prose, but you sir, take the cake and fuck it, too.

This was simply one the best. It combined not only lust but it showed how the family over came obstacles, with the love they had for each other. Even though it centered more on family values, the sex moments were the best ones for me. Lucky guy to have a mother and a sister who have perfect breasts and firm butt's. None the less a great story!

Can you believe it, 351 comments so far! Mr. Scouries is a genius with hot tales of family fuckers. The comments are nearly as good as the story. Check out all the females who've gotten fucked by their brother or dearly wish they'd get some hard brotherly cock up their cunts. (A hint to all the bold brothers out there who've had an eye on their sister's cute ass.) Then there are the guys who whack off dreaming of getting their stiff young pricks up their sister's sweet slit, or best of all up their mother's fat puss. Most all the young guys want to fuck a baby, or lots of babies!, up their mother's cunt. Why the heck not, they've got the potent young balls to do it, and knocking up mom makes a boy a young motherfucker bursting with pride. Mr. Scouries's hero, Bobby, is my hero too. He knows what he wants--the family twats--and he goes and gets them! The logical place for Bobby's big stiff prick is up his sis's and his mom's cunts, and that's where Bobby goes to unload his big balls, planting his seed up the family twats. Family making family, as one commenter put it, nothing better. Sister and mother LOVE what the boy's got swinging between his legs, his dick and balls are the center of their lives and of the family's life. Funny, cocky, self-confident Bobby is one of the great iconic figures on Literotica, and long may he and his triumphant family-fucking prick and his fertile family-making balls reign!

Frecking sweet read

Best storie i have read in ages. It is brought down in stages, step by step. I nearly cumed all over my screen!

I don't think that I've cummed as much from reading a story as I did reading this one!

I'm sticky and wet, touching myself right now and getting my keyboard messy,,,what a fucking great story...i need to read it again and keep playing with myself...wow, so good....love reading about his seed...

It reminds me of the night that me and my sister fucked its been over 5 years and we still make love every night she is the best fuck I've ever had

im 11 yearss oldd adn i lik=e neopets

Wow!!! what a great story! i came like 3 times during the whole thing!!! really great story man.......keep it up!!!:)

I squirteed all over the keyboard....Please Keep Writing!!!

Wish it was me with them

I've never been into the incest thing, but this story made me squirt across my boyfriend's couch. My pussy is sooooo wet. I'd like to hear more like this.

One of the best stories i've read

I never thought incest stories could be arousing. Now I wish I had a brother. Wish there was a bit more detail in the sex scenes, and the sister should have gotten pregnant first, mom already had her turn. Great story overall.

yeah im not really into "incest" but this was amazing im so horny now like you wouldnt beleive thanks and keep on bringing more

I loved how this story was as much about the love that the three characters felt for each other as it was about the sex. Well done.

I only wish that you had written a little more about what happened between Patty and her mother.

That being said, I really do need to go and apply some lotion to my, now thoroughly abused, cock ;o)

Our mother was lazy, overweight and unsexy but my sister and I were very active sex partners from just before she was twelve. I was almost fourteen when I took her virginity. She resisted but not that hard and actually opened her legs a bit wider when she saw my cock getting closer to her then lightly hair covered pussy.

I'd been playing with her pussy for a few weeks and she liked it so she was pretty wet when I pushed her legs further apart and got between them. When she saw my cock about a foot away and aimed at her pussy, that's when she knew that I intended to put it in and fuck her. She started putting up a weak and unconvincing resistance but then opened wider, just before my cock touched her pussy and stopped resisting.

I had seven and a half inches, then, so when it started sliding into her tight little cunt opening, I could tell that it hurt but I kept working it back and forth until it was all the way in. She started crying when I broke her hymen so after it was all in, I stopped and held still... enjoying how tight she was and feeling her pussy muscles strangling its invader. She was still crying when I started fucking her but after she got more used to having it inside of her, she quieted down and I fucked her until I came in her.

When I pulled it out and lay down next to her, she didn't try to get up. She just complained that her pussy hurt and said that I'd raped her. I looked at her and laughed and said, it's not rape when you hold still while I'm putting it in.

A minute later, she smiled and said "It hurt going in and it felt real big and hurt after you got it all in but it stopped hurting too much when you were doing it to me."

She soon accepted what fate had delivered on her when, a few minutes later, I went back into her and fucked her again. The only thing she complained about, afterward, was that her pussy was sore and that there was a lot of my "stuff" coming out of it.

She told me that she wasn't going to tell Mom or Dad and made me promise to not tell anybody, either, because she didn't want anybody to know that she'd had sex... especially with her brother.

When I went to fuck her again, the next day, she said she was sore so I put some Vaseline on both of us and then worked it in as gently as I could. When she'd adjusted, I started fucking her and a couple of minutes later she started fucking me back. I asked her if she liked it and she said the outside of her pussy was sore but it made the inside of it feel good. Two days after that, she started her first orgasm, just as I was starting mine and we came together. Until then, I didn't know that girls could squirt but when her hot cum started flushing out and soaking my balls, the warm feeling made me cum even harder.

A few weeks later, Mom got home early and we didn't hear her come in. She must have heard us and came into my room to catch us naked and fucking like a pair of rabbits. She screamed and raised hell but she didn't tell Dad.

When she put Cindy on birth control, we knew that we had a license and we used it. That was eight years ago. We share a one bedroom off campus apartment, now, and our license is still valid.

Neither of us has ever fucked anyone else or even dated anyone else. She's still tight as hell and can't wait to get back here to have my nine inch cock reaming her. She missed her last period, though. It was due last week. She's still on the pill but they're not 100%. At first, she said she didn't care if she's pregnant but this afternoon she said she thinks she is and hopes she is. Uh Oh.

not really into the whole incest thing but loved the love and emotions stand point very good read.

I liked the story very much but was disappointed with the ending.The boy was better of without marrying his mother and sister nor by making them pregnant.But the story as a whole receives a 3 star rating from me:)

I usually don't like incest stories other than mom-son stories but this one was pretty good, i liked it a lot and espcially that he imprgnants his mom!you should have wrote a scene where the mother gives birth to the forbidden child,it's still great though!keep them coming

I've read this story 12 times and it never gets old. It's the best erotic stories I've ever read and I want to see a continuation of the story ASAP. Also, I'd like to write my own stories someday and hope that I'll be as good as you.

If you keep writing, I'll sure as hell keep reading!

I mostly read stories about mother-son incest. This is good mixture between mother-son & brother-sister incest. Overall a great story. I loved it.

A suggestion from my side is include to more of mother-son sex as compared to brother-sister sex .The ratio of mother-son to brother-sister sex should be 3:1 approximately.

I masterbaited to this, like 55 times, now my computer is all sticky :C

This is another one of your great stories! This would be a book you can't put down! Thanks.

I love this story so much. It makes me wet every time I read it, please write more?

Love Lilla xxxx

True love knows no boundaries. A great story that mostly made me happy not horny! Two thumbs up!

wow how did you amagin this masterpiece

This has to be greatest story of motherfucking and sisterhumping on the net! After all these years and the hundreds of comments, the great Mr. Scouries keeps drawing well-deserved praise from actual or wannabe family fuckers. As one commenter remarked, the comments are nearly as great as the story itself. "Every boy wants to fuck his mother and sister" is a well-known fact. It's the nature of the young male, who always wants to get his stiff young prick up a family twat. For him, that's what family twats ARE FOR! I love the young females who admit getting damp between their legs over their hunky big brother and would love to open up their sweet young slits for his big fat brotherly prick. And more and more of them are doing just that! Many of them want their big brother to get them pregnant, and many get their wish--one young lady's pregnant for the second time from her brother's potent young balls. "Family making family"--nothing like it! Some, like the 15 year old boy, just get their dick sucked off by their mother and sister--but don't worry, getting that dick up their cunts is just a matter of time, kid. One young lady's showing her five year older brother her sweet young tits--how soon will she show him her cute little twat--and then watch out! Big brother'll do what brothers do to their kid sister's twat! Together with their mother's fat puss it's the best place for a young male to unload his hot balls up into. Ignore the nay-sayers: to the old truth, "A mother's twat is her son's playground" more and more thousands are finding out, "A sister's cunt is her brother's playground" as well!

Would like to read the next chapter and woud like to know what happened to cathy excellant story keep up the good work

wow i now im still too young to be reading these but i can't help it. they make me soo wet. now i rub my self and think about my mum :s.

This has got to be the most putrefied bit of writing I've ever encountered. No, scratch that. The second most putrefied bit of writing. The first was "Daddy," I whispered. Where the hell did you learn how to write? I normally enjoy incest stories but this one was a complete turn-off. I've read all the hype on the message boards and I must say, I'm not impressed. If you want to go on and on about your "legendary" status on this site, I suggest you take a serious crash course in writing. The characters were one dimensional, the dialogue was flat and the whole story made me wonder why it was even written in the first place. Literotica's #1 author? Not by a long shot. Perhaps one day you'll learn how to write a sensual and erotic incest piece instead of this tripe. Good day to you.

Let me know - and I enjoyed it - but would have rather had you embellish more to the ending instead of 'wrapping it up.'

wow, very nice, I love the sound of what happened and am so happy that all you three got what you wanted, now I'm always horny near my sister and want to have my penis in her and want to have a family with her:)

well scouries, i've just got to know of you through one of your "loving wifes" stories & decided to check out your others.

i really enjoy this & the other tales i've read of yours so far & look forward to reading the rest of your stories & (hopefully) lots more from you in the future! Love the emotions & happiness that i find in what i've read so far.

Being 86 years old my own cum still tastes as sweet as ever

A beautiful story, so well written. Who better to teach a son than a loving mother and sister.

I loved this story I've read some stories like this but this is the best one I've ever read not only a completely detailed erotic story but it has great imagery it stands out so much to me please make another one I would enjoy reading it very much

I loved the sensuality without vulgarity.

great story I loved the fact that it wasn't as dirty as other storys makes it even better

You had me wet and fingering myself at first then I had to use my dildo thinking it was Bobbty deep inside me. Only wish it had been as I had a good orgasm. More stories like this one.

Thanks,

Julie. NZ

what a great and well written story. Thank you for sharing it.

i likey very well done please do more llike this

absolutly top class story pal

This is the best story ever ive read and reread it many times over. The story is sooooo sexy ;-)

Fullfills all my fantasies

hi jim

I'm a frequent visitor to literotica more for the sake of my mind's pleasure, than that of my body. Your writing, the wholeness of your characters, thier past, future and of course, present had me enthralled from the beginning and short of breath by the end

I look forward to reading more of your work

Etherknight

I've read many different sexual fantasies and tales on this (and some other) sites, and I can honestly say, yours is truly great. Most are half-assed works, not worth the time it takes to load their pages. It's good to see an author actually put some effort into their writting.

Keep it up!

Too long a story.

Sexy, sensual (as usual with this author) but sweet. Loved it, just great.

I'm reading EVERY story written by this author and I'm finding what a great writer he is. ALWAYS VOTE!

Holy Shit. That Was amazingly epicly awesome.