All Comments on 'Onyx Dreams Ch. 22'

i liked the plot set by u plz post net one soon

i ma eagrly wating for the next one plz post it quick

This is an AWESOME story...don't get me wrong..but ever since one of the earlier chapters I've been kind of confused. During one of the scenes in which Erykia was caning Kennice, Rhys spanked her, as well, and the text said that it left a very visible handprint on her "milk chocolate" skin. Is Kennice black? In the end, it really doesn't make a difference, but for visualization purposes...I'd like to know. Thanks!

Oh dear! It seems that Hayden waited much too long to help Cyrus with Kennice, if that was ever his intention? Cyrus will really snap when he finds out that he has lost Kennice - and from what we read about Rhys, Kennice will regret her decision very soon. And I was hoping that they would get at least a little happiness :-(

ok i gave this chapter a 1 star rating just because kennice agreed to mary rhys and that made me really really pissed.